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Needs improving.

This has the making of a decent flash, but you'll need some drastic changes.

1) Graphics are good but could be better.
2) How can we tell if the actual thing will be interesting/a horror if all we see is a poorly done crash scene?
3) Definitly longer. If you computer crashes or whatever, wait 'till it's fixed and make it then, don't send us something we don't like and will surely blam.
4) Some voice would've made this more appealing.
5) Better storyline. All we know about the storyline at this time is some guy crashes, gets knocked unconcious and a woman drives by a notices him.

Improve this flash and send it back in once it's -completly- finished.

-Toranksu

Lumberjackdave responds:

Thx

Why put this on Newgrounds?

Why would you put a documentary typ of flash on newgrounds? I'm sure we get enough of that in school, let alone watching it here.

And your "voice-over" guy sucked. His voice was terrible.

I voted 0 on this, because 9/10 chances are it's going to get blammed.

timus7 responds:

Flash by Toranksu:
- none -

FLASH Portal

This is the flash portal, not the AMV portal.

Nomalas responds:

........okay now do a search for the Lost Raphodsy fin dit watch it and then tell me that that isnt an amv well atleast its not a cartoon........but you get my point....

Meh.

It was decent for a Pokemon flash

I'd like to say it was nice to see Pokemon get killed by guns, but that's so unorigonal and old it's just boring now.

As well, you never mentioned anything about Final Fantasy in your comments.

Cactuar is, afterall, from Final Fantasy. ;-\

vlad1950 responds:

Well the cactuar was just ment to be as a joke. Why he was in a pokeball is anybody's guess...

No.

Say "No" to this flash.

Kenzu responds:

No...
...(to you)

Stupid

What the hell was this? I guess it's called turd for a reason other than the piles of crap dancing around like idiots. I really can't understand how something like this could make the front page.

I can't really say I liked anything about this. The music was pretty decent, everything was, well, shit. Of course, this is only my opinion, I know that some people do enjoy toilet humor, but this flash really wasn't funny.

Better graphics, better style, funnier, stop obbessively repeating all of what you did. Those are my suggestions to bring this to at most a "5" for me. Your graphics were terrible, it looks as if it were made to entertain a six year old, and all your props were done over and over again, do you have any brain at all to at least make it so that every second scene isn't the same as the one two scenes ago?

I hope you can do better than this, I really don't want to see anything like this again.

brycemilburn responds:

dont worry dude, im not going to submit anything like this again, i was just bored and i couldnt sleep and i wanted to make something that would be the turd of the week, just to see if i could do it, but apparently, ppl like it enough for front page material, beats me, w/e they want. but thanks for watching man.

Decent

It was an okay flash.

The overall theme of the flash was pretty funny, I must admit, I did enjoy it a little. That poor alien didn't know what was coming when he got that free cat, that's for sure.

The biggest improvement you could make for this flash is to make bettwe graphics. I was very aware I was watching a poorly made flash when I was watching this. Next flash you make take more time into making it look more realistic instead of making it so, for example, the aliens arm doesn't just appear in one spot to another, make it actually move.

Other than that, I really did find it to be an alright flash.

Good job, hope you make some more!

Rubbertje responds:

Hmm, ok.. All people seem to think differently about the graphics! That's weird....

Trying to get a little better known as a voice actor around here. If you need a voice actor for anything at all, just send me a PM, and I'll audition for it. (I also Voice Act for free)

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