I like it.
For a first flash, I have to say I am very amazed. This was very well-done, and considering you did it under free trial just makes it all the better!
I gave the graphics an 6, you did a great job with the scenes and although the characters were sprites, you still did good. The only real reason the mark is low is because of the lip-syncing.
Style got a definite 8, really cool, I must say. The storyline is pretty funny.
Sound is a 4 because, quite frankly, I didn't have my speakers plugged in so I don't know if you had any or not!
Violence is a 6, it was there, just not in an overall plot.
Interactivity 2, there was a play button after all.
Humor 10, all out funny. Poor Bowser is horny!!
Keep it up, if you get flash again you must make the sequel!
~Leonard