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Nicely animated.

This was a very smooth animation. It was very fun to watch, however, not fun at all to hear. I think it would've been 100x better if you used different music, and didn't make it a loop. I think you did do an outstanding job on this, however, and I did give you a fairly high score. Hopefully you'll continue to improve yourself!!

Graphics; 9, nicely done!!
Style; 7, it may be just me but I don't see this stuff much, pretty original.
Sound; 1, couldn't stand the vocals. :[
Violence; 5, meh, it's monsters, one gets eaten, so, 5 should be good?
Interactivity; 0, self explanatory.
Humor; 7, i thought it was all pretty funny myself.

Keep it up!!

~Leonard

Very well done.

For a first flash, you've done an outstanding job on this. It had a decent storyline, the sprites weren't all.. blurty, they actually looked very well. The music gets repetitive but goes well with the overall flow of it. All in all you did a good job on the flash, keep it up!

Okay, here's the template on how I based my points.

Graphics: 5, it was well done, but everything could be better.

Style: 7, You see these kinds of flashes a lot, but I just can't get enough of them, I like them lots!

Sound: 8, kind of repetitive, but it flowed very well with the flash.

Violence: 5, not all that violent, but it did show in your flash.

Interactivity: 8, lots of things to click on it, just the fact that it was all for the same thing, it was nice of you to put them there though. :-)

Humor: 1, eh, not funny, who cares?

Improvement: Well, not much for me to tell you on improving, you did basically as good as it's gonna get for a sprite flash, your storyline was good (and even if it wasn't, who am I to tell you to change YOUR flash to suit me better?), I think if you had some more character development and made the "next" buttons look 'prettier', you'd do an outstanding job for your episode 2!

Keep it up!!

~Leonard

You've made a mockery of MCR.

Before posting stuff on Newgrounds, you should practice things more, especially when you're dealing with such a great song. To me, putting any song created by My Chemical Romance into a flash with so little effort put into it is a mockery, and I think you could've, and should've, put A LOT more effort into this. Some scenes were decently done (i.e- when Bowser and Mario were fighting on a rooftop), but even that could've been a lot better. I don't think this really deserved to have made it past judgement, rather the song you chose is the true reason behind the little success it did recieve. Keep practicing, and the next time you decide to use great songs such as the one you chose, make sure it has a great flash to back it up.

1/5

~Leonard

Cool.

It's a well drawn picture, the whole phasey thing you got it going through makes it look well to. Naturally, the reason for its lacking of success is because it doesn't have a storyline, it's short, etc... But you did still do a very good job on what you did actually do. I gave it a four because what you did was impressive, but if you actually make a flash movie, or game, with animation like this, it could easily be a 9 or 10.

~Leonard

Sir-CannabisClock responds:

thanks sir, much appreciated

DEFINITLY not my type of flash.

This seemed to be a fairly well done flash, until you started to really get into it. At the beginning of the flash it seemed well-done, very organized and clearly taken a lot of time to make. However, then we get into some major technicalities. For one, the sound was UNBEARABLY horrible! I had to throw my headphones off and turn off my sound because the sound just drove me insane!! As well, everything was way to flashy, and it seemed like you never put much work into the ending. The jokes were okay, but highly overrated. I wouldn't reccomend this flash to anyone that enjoys their hearing abilities. So here's how I based my judgement upon Toms rating system;

Graphics: 8, you've put together a fairly good claymation.
Style: 2, highly overrated, unoriginal
Sound: 0, HORRIBLE!!!!!
Violence: 5, well, it's Saw afterall
Interactivity: 2, play buttons, I didn't really get completly to the end, I stopped after the mom part, so I don't know if you had a replay button. I gave you an extra point for it anyways.
Humor: 3, decently funny, I guess..
Overall: 4, self-explanitory.

2/5

~Leonard

LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dude that was hilarious!
"Sucks: The final frontier"
"Sucks sucks sucks sucks, sucks suck sucks sucks, this sucks, this sucks, this SUUUUCCKKSS!"

Haha dude that was really funny! I totally agree with you to. :-)
Your graphics seemed like a great style to me, I don't think I've seen anything quite animated like this. Hilarious flash. :-)

Keep it up!

5'ed

~Leonard

Decent, I suppose..

Definitly not one of my favorite flashes, I think you should've put a lot more time and effort into this. If you'd taken more time to make the fire, their movement, and the smoke more realistic I think this would've been a lot better. A background would've been nice to. Not very origonal, sound was OK, not all that violent aside from the dude lighting on fire, but that's not "violent" in my book. Little interactivity and it wasn't all that funny, but, I did like it a little. It made me smile a bit. Decent job but try harder next time.

2/5

~Leonard

Nice one!

I liked this a lot. As a former Runescaper myself, I naturally have respect for this flash. You're a great animator, the graphics in this were very impressive. No problems with sound, little violence and interactivity, but God was it ever funny! You did an outstanding job, great going!

5/5

~Leonard

Bobert-Rob responds:

Thanks for the comment, buddy. I try, I really do.

Trying to get a little better known as a voice actor around here. If you need a voice actor for anything at all, just send me a PM, and I'll audition for it. (I also Voice Act for free)

Leonard O'Keefe @Billy-Bean

Age 35, Male

Voice Actor

College of the North Atlantic

Canada, AB

Joined on 4/25/06

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